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Looking for tips on how to bolster your chances even more? Follow these 3 simple tips, and you'll be well on your way.

1) Be Organized: With the Script-a-thon, you've got just one month to get your script into judgeable shape. Obviously, our judges understand what it's like to write a script in one month. And they take this into account when judging. 

But still, a little bit of organization goes a long way. That means you need STORY! Make sure you hit your beats. 

If your script has a beginning, middle and end, you're way ahead of the crowd.

But organization also includes some simpler stuff: spelling, grammar, punctuation and formatting. Give your script that extra polish at the midnight hour. 

The work will show, and that will please the judges.

2) Keep It Short

I don't mean you should cut out important information. But make sure your script is just as long as it needs to be, and not much longer. 

Yes, you only have a month to get this thing into shape. But here are some quick tips on making sure you're not over-writing your script:

- Eliminate needless action. Lots of writers spend way too much time writing action. Keep your action paragraphs quick and crisp. You can save 15 pages off of 120. Seriously.

- Get in and out of scenes quickly. Again, this is a shortening tip that won't require any huge rewrites. Just cut all the non-essentials from your scenes. Start as late as possible and get out as early as possible. 

it's been said before, but it definitely bears repeating.


3) First 10 Pages

You've heard this one before too. Your first ten pages are ESSENTIAL. Your judge will form an opinion on your writing very quickly, so make those first pages pop.

Make those pages memorable and unique. Let them move quickly. And always keep in mind - readers (and all audiences) remember moments. 

Craft memorable moments (at least one) in your first ten pages. Approach something in a new and exciting way. Include an amazing joke. A bad ass car chase. Something where your audience leaves the theater and goes... "What about that thing that happened in the beginning? That was amazing!"

Remember, the first round is just about separating the good scripts from the...not so good. If your script works on these basic levels, you've got a great chance of moving on.

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I am sick and tired of hearing people advising first time writers NOT to do free options (or dollar options as they’re often called) when trying to break in. Here’s the deal – if you’re a first time writer with no credits, no contacts, and no representation - what the hell do you think you’re gonna get? A million dollars? It’s never EVER going to happen.

And if you notice, the people that advise against these free options are usually lawyers or agents. You know why? Because they can’t commission air. And if they could, an agent would find a way. And while they are working for you, they are also working for their commission. Producers, on the other hand, are working for your project – whether they pay you for it or not.
Some say not to do the free option because if the producer doesn’t have any money at stake (no skin in the game so to speak), they will have less motivation to work hard and get your movie made – what a bunch of bullshit! Anyone who says this -- is an idiot.

Indie producers don’t get paid unless the movie gets MADE – not set up – MADE – so they have EVERY motivation to push hard or else what’s the point? Why would a producer option your material for a year and pour in their sweat equity doing draft after draft for FREE if they are just going to sit on it and don’t think they can get it going? It’s not like they make any money doing that.

I’ve never paid for an option. I’ve paid for an extension on an option, but never on the original option. Chances are your first option is going to be to an independent production company. It’s rare that you get your FIRST option from a studio, and it’s even rarer if you don’t have an agent or good manager.

And I don’t know of any independent production companies (unless they have a studio deal) that pay a baby writer to option their first project. And IF they do, it’s not gonna be for more than $1000.  Even if a studio wants to option your project, they don’t really pay more than $5k unless you have a great agent. The exception is if you’re optioning a successful book, graphic novel, etc. –then you can make some nicer money.

Assuming the person or company offering this free option is an upstanding and worthwhile producer, it’s in your best interest to have him or her on your side, championing and developing your project with you. And believe me, a good producer works just as hard on your project as you do. We have to go through it line by line, draft after draft, and come up with extensive notes plus do the pitching, selling, submitting, etc. Any writer who says execs don’t have to be creative -- can go fuck themselves.

Now, there are some dangers to the free option and you need to do your due diligence and protect yourself!!  But the same can be said about the options you get $5-10k for. In fact, there’s a BETTER chance that if a studio is paying you real money for an option, it could fall by the waist side because they have 100 other projects they are working on and $5k doesn’t mean shit to them, whereas $500 means a whole lot to an independent producer.

Plus, if a studio offers you real money for an option, it could be because they are trying to bury the project to get it out of the way of a competing project they are already working on with a bigger writer.  This happens WAY more than you think it does.  
But when you are deciding whether or not to sign with (and work with) a producer, especially on a dollar option, there ARE some things you should research and look for:
1.    Does the producer have a track record of getting movies sold, made, etc?
2.    Do they have the necessary contacts to package a project and get it set up OR do they have access to financing (if they don’t have financing themselves)?
3.    Do they give clear and creatively smart notes that improve the project and do so in a somewhat timely manner (a few weeks IS timely)?
4.    Do they truly love and “get” the project and do you get along with them?
5.    Do they have a PLAN for the project – places they want to submit it to, actors or directors they think are right for it, etc.
If all of these can be answered affirmatively, then why WOULDN’T you want to work with them? Are that many other people knocking down your door?
Now, even assuming all of the above are true, you still need to look closely at your contracts and protect yourself.  You need to make sure what rights you are signing away and for how long. Most options last 6 months to 2 years. Anything more than that and I’d be wary because then they COULD just sit on your project for a while. I’d also suggest making sure that if the option lapses and rights revert back to you, that you ALSO get the rights to all the subsequent drafts, notes and improvements that have been made during the option period.  This is where some producers get sneaky, so you should always have a lawyer look at your contract.
Do you need a signed contract before you do notes? No. And you probably won’t get one.  I never send out contracts until after I get the second draft back because I don’t want to be contracted to a writer that can’t take or address notes or doesn’t know how to rewrite. That kind of writer is useless to an executive, especially at an independent production company where they are not going to hire another big-money writer to fix it. But I’d probably only do ONE draft of notes before asking for that contract.
Personally, I would suggest that instead of entering into an option, you go for the easier and more mutually-beneficial agreement - which is an Attachment Agreement.  An exclusive Attachment Agreement protects us all – producers are exclusively attached to develop and try to sell your script but you retain your story rights. And no money exchanges hands. I’d suggest pushing for these instead of the dollar option.
I hope this debunked some of the myths on options that seem to be out there. Just remember -- protect yourself, protect your story…but don’t be a diva.

Daniel Manus is an in-demand script consultant and founder of No BullScript Consulting, which can be found at www.nobullscript.net and is the author of “No B.S. for Screenwriters: Advice from the Executive Perspective.” He was the Director of Development for Clifford Werber Productions (Cinderella Story, Sydney White) and is attached to produce several projects independently. Daniel was previously a Development Consultant for Eclectic Pictures and the DOD at Sandstorm Films, which had a first look deal at Screen Gems. He is also a columnist for The Business of Show Institute and teaches seminars to writers all across the country.

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There's a lot of mystery surrounding log lines. What are they? Do screenwriters really need them? Is there any correlation between log lines and actual logs in the forest? 

When prodded, Google coughed up these top two definitions: 

1) "A log line or logline is a brief summary of a television program or film, often providing both a synopsis of the program's plot, and an emotional 'hook' to stimulate interest." - Wikipedia

Okay. So according to Wikipedia, the log line for "The Bourne Identity" would look like the summary provided on Net Flix...

"Wounded to the brink of death and suffering from amnesia, Jason Bourne is rescued at sea by a fisherman. With nothing to go on but a Swiss bank account number, he starts to reconstruct his life, but finds that many people he encounters want him dead. Bourne realizes, though, that he has the combat and mental skills of a world-class spy, but who does he work for?"

2) "A log line is a one sentence summary of your script." - Scriptologist 

In accordance with this definition, something like this might make more sense: "A man with a damaged memory struggles to uncover his identity while fighting off an army of trained assassins, ultimately learning that he too was one of these assassins, and escaping to an island with a pretty girl." 

A little clunky. Not much of a "hook to stimulate interest" there either.

At Script Quack Script Analysis, our definition of log lines bridges the gap between the two excerpted above. We like to think of the log line as a one sentence description of your story, outlining the key elements of hero, antagonist, conflict and irony. 

Our ideas about log lines were largely sculpted by Blake Snyder's interpretation in "Save the Cat." Snyder's book focuses on crafting commercially viable screenplays. As such, he also suggests that your log line indicate audience and cost.  

But still, knowing all that doesn't shine a very bright light on the process of crafting a good log line. It's often an arduous, painstaking task, where the patient screenwriter must turn a pile of words over and over again, until they somehow resemble a smooth, seamless movie idea. 

And that's why log lines are so essential. They force you to sculpt, trim and prune your idea into one that's worth outlining, writing and re-writing a million times. 

Sometimes attempting to form a log line will teach you that your idea just doesn't work. But when you've got a good idea, your log line will be the first nugget of gold that will guide you throughout the entire process. 
So without further delay, let's mold a messy, nebulous idea into a strong log line that indicates hero, antagonist, conflict, irony, audience and cost. We'll continue to use "The Bourne Identity" for this exercise. 

In the beginning, all you'll really have is the bones of your idea, or story. The first step is to write all that down, as succinctly as you can. It'll be very loose, and much too long at first, but don't worry about that for now. 

For Bourne, maybe you'd write something like the Netflix blurb, something like this:

When a highly-trained super spy wakes up with amnesia, on a boat in the middle of the sea, he begins the process of discovering his true identity. But the process is complicated, when he's chased by stealthy assassins, and must risk his life. He runs from the assassins, darting across Europe with a beautiful female companion. In the end, he discovers that he is actually one of these assassins himself, but decides to run away, and give up killing forever.

Now that that's out of the way, you can start trimming. Read the clunky, awkward sentences above like an encrypted prison letter. There's valuable stuff in there, if you can just find it. Scan for hero, antagonist, conflict and irony and cut everything else.

That leaves "highly trained super spy," "stealthy assassins," "chased by..." and the irony is essentially Bourne's amnesia. 

Don't be afraid to leave out any details other than those specified above. All effective log lines omit story details. In the Bourne log line, for instance, we don't need to mention Europe, the female companion, or the end of the story. Log lines are about brevity and subtlety. The power comes from how quickly and effectively you can communicate your idea. 

Take a second pass at the log line now, trying to include only the elements you scanned for after the first pass. Maybe you'll come up with something like this:

When a highly trained super spy with amnesia is hunted by stealthy assassins, he has to stay alive long enough to figure out who he is.

Clearly, this isn't eloquent writing. Right now, you're just getting your ideas out. Block out your filter. Ignore that voice screaming that "THAT SENTENCE IS TERRIBLE AND CONFUSING!" Remain patient as you polish - the end result will be worth it. 

Time for another pass. This time, try to mold these elements with a little more grace. Cut unnecessary words, and make sure your details are accurate, informative and essential. 

The first thing I'd cut is "when." This is a mistake that lots of first time writers make. "When" is an unnecessary word. If you cut it, you'll throw your reader into the meat of your concept more quickly. The 'when' is implied. 

Next, look at how you've defined your hero. "Highly trained super spy." That's actually not too bad. But it's a little redundant. Cut 'super' and the log line will work better. 

Continue to scour the log line for small redundancies. Play around with the order of the words. Make sure that all of the essential elements are clearly defined and prominent in the log line. 

You'll end up with something like this...

A highly trained spy wakes up with amnesia and must determine his true identity before he's killed by government assassins.  

This log line is short and powerful. Notice the presence of all the necessary elements:

hero - a highly trained spy

antagonist - government assassins

conflict - evading the assassins, figuring out true identity

irony - a super spy with amnesia

Also take notice of the adjectives we've used. They were carefully selected to communicate as much as possible about the story in very few words. 

Finally, this log line clearly indicates audience and cost. Because it is a slim, trim story description, it's clear that this is a standard 'genre' piece. It's an action thriller. The demographic is clear. The cost can certainly vary, but could be ball-parked pretty accurately based on similar movies in the genre.

Although this process isn't the most glamorous part of screenwriting, it's immensely satisfying. Log lines are hugely important to screenwriters. Yes - of course it's possible to write without one, but we don't advise it. 

Why deny yourself the joy of a tight, compact concept? As you form your outline and write your draft, you'll find yourself referring back to the log line over and over again. It keeps you on track and will save you weeks - maybe months - of rewriting in the future. 
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I’ve had a number of writers email me, asking to discuss the term “high concept.”

I’ll confess…when I started working in this business as an assistant, and heard the term “high concept” over and over, at first I assumed it meant high budget. Then I thought it had something to do with drugs. But I quickly learned that a high concept project is a unique story that can be described clearly, succinctly and effectively in about one sentence – and you will understand and picture exactly what that movie is.

If your project is high concept, then that ONE sentence description should not only make us easily understand the story and make it clear what the demographic is and why it’s unique and original, but also make us picture the trailer, the poster, and the actor who would want to be cast.

If it’s a comedy, then your one line (and quite frankly even your title) should make it OBVIOUS that there are a ton of original, funny things that could happen. If you’re writing a thriller – it needs to be clear that the potential for great suspense and thrills is there. Horror, same thing.

Can your project do that? Don’t answer just yet.

High concept properties are more about the premise and idea than the characters and their personal struggles. More about visuals and hooks than deep narratives and emotions. But almost any movie can be described in one or two sentences – that’s not enough. The hook – what makes your concept original and different – also has to be really clear. And high concept properties should be appropriate for mass audiences (at LEAST 2 out of the 4 quadrants - male, female, young, old).

Technically, the film Kids can be described in one sentence - a group of inner city youths do drugs and have sex until they realize their actions can have horrific consequences. But what’s NEW about that? What’s high concept about it? What’s the mass appeal? Nada.

Ninety percent (90%) of writers fail because their concept just isn’t strong enough, original enough, or commercial enough. They are doomed from the start.

If your project is so intricate, so complex, so cerebral that no one will get it (and get it quickly) – then it’s not high concept. This doesn’t mean it’s not commercial – Inception was NOT high concept. But MOST studio films are. Why? Because they have to be able to be marketed well, and low concept material is much harder to market. There are very few studios who actually market low concept well. Fox Searchlight is probably the best in the business (Slumdog Millionaire, Black Swan, Little Miss Sunshine, etc). But most studios just don’t get it.

And neither do audiences. Audiences, by and large, are stupid and have no attention span. High concept material is pitch-driven. But if your pitch starts with “so the troubled protagonist had this horrible childhood and goes on this journey to find himself…blah blah blah” – it’s NOT high concept! High concept pitches do not start with character and back story - they start with premise and action. If it takes 10 minutes to explain your story…that’s 9 minutes and 45 seconds too long. But if you can describe your story by simply saying “big shiny thing here now BOOM” - people will get it.

Comedies (especially R-rated and romantic comedies), action films, some horror, disaster movies, etc – these are the projects that are most often high concept. It’s harder to make dramas, teen movies, fantasy, and more intricate thrillers into high concept projects.

The very first purposefully high concept movies are often considered to be Jaws and Star Wars. Though the ultimate example of high concept is actually movies like Snakes on a Plane – you get everything you need to know in 4 words. Other great examples of high concept projects include Jurassic Park, Liar Liar, Groundhog Day, Armageddon, Wedding Crasher, Transformers, Air Force One, Speed, 40 Year-Old Virgin, Titanic, Home Alone, War of the Worlds, etc.

Great examples of low concept fare – Pulp Fiction, Sideways, Little Miss Sunshine, Fargo, Citizen Kane, Syriana, Garden State, almost anything by Robert Altman or Woody Allen, etc. You can see the difference in just the titles.

This doesn’t mean that your high concept project can’t tackle more in-depth issues or have an interesting story with lots of characters and plotlines. It just means that the hook to your script has to be so clear and original and understandable in one line that audiences will get what they are in for.

Studios largely work within the world of high concept. So if you want to be a studio writer, spend more time coming up with the best concept and premise with the most potential and commercial appeal instead of worrying if your character’s personal journey has a new plot point introduced on page 38. I hope that clears up what high concept material encompasses. Good luck and keep writing!

Daniel Manus is an in-demand script consultant and founder of No BullScript Consulting, which can be found at www.nobullscript.net and is the author of the E-Book “No B.S. for Screenwriters: Advice from the Executive Perspective.” He was the Director of Development for Clifford Werber Productions (Cinderella Story, Sydney White) and is attached to produce several projects independently. Daniel was previously a Development Consultant for Eclectic Pictures and the DOD at Sandstorm Films, which had a first look deal at Screen Gems and a development deal with Top Cow Comics. He is also a columnist for The Business of Show Institute and teaches seminars to writers all across the country.

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